Write a 5-7 Line Poem Related to the Poem Below.?

Question by charmaine_gem: write a 5-7 line poem related to the poem below.?
I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud

i wandered lonely as a cloud
that floats on high o’er vales and hills,
when all at once i saw a crowd,
a host of golden daffodils;
beside the lake, beneath the trees,
fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

countinuous as the stars that shine
and twinkle on the milky way,
they stretched in never-ending line,
along the margin of bay:
ten thousand saw i at a glance,
tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

the waves beside them danced; but they
outdid the sparkling waves in glee-:
a poet could not be gay,
in such a jocund company,
i gazed-and gazed-but little thought
what wealth the show to me had brought:

for oft, when on my couch i lie
in vacant or in pensive mood,
they flash upon that inward eye
which is the bliss of solitude;
and then my heart with pleasure fills,
and dances with the daffodils.

Best answer:

Answer by hanmabookie
this poem is really long, my friend;
i could not wait to reach the end.
this does not mean the poem was bad,
but only that it made me sad.
for i too have played in fields of gold
the remembrance of this dates me old.

(give me credit for trying.)

(and by “dates me old” i meant “makes me feel old.”)

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  1. jhez says:

    the sky is out wide,
    and the horizon’s tide,
    all leads and guide,
    to stars that hide,

    what you dont see,
    when all have flee,
    is just there with thee…